i want to read your body
like neruda poem
written in braille,
my fingers searching
the pages of your skin,
gently brushing away
the hair that falls
like a silken bookmark
across your face.
i will work my way
down the page, hands
trembling with excitement,
anticipating which words
will follow.
fingers will linger
in some areas, reread,
so that on lonely nights
like this one I will
be able to recite
the subtle nuances of
your neck or the mystery
surrounding your navel.
I would try to interpret
the verse for others,
but there is no translation
for your lungs breathing
into the palm of my hand,
or your heart, beating
its ancient tribal rhythms
in correspondence with mine.














Comments
i see you are branching out into the erotic section now.
some of your other poems have had hints of an erotic quality but it is nice to see something like this from you.
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destroying my body is easy, but how do i kill my soul?
+fav
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"Good teaching is 1/3 preparation and 3/4 theater" - Gail Goodwin
*briskly rubs the hair on the back of her neck, willing it to stop tingling*
yum yum yum.
gorgeous and beautiful.
yum.
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"Part of you pours out of me in these lines from time to time."
-Joni Mitchell
Even so, you've done justice to the name. The delicacy and insight of extended metaphor here is powerful and real; it's doublespeak and it works well. I'd like to see more of it, really. I kept wanting to hear something about the spine or the pages and I never did, as the second half moved away from the acts of recitation and translation.
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Your humbleness is showing:
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