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it's not a solution, she said by ~dreamsnhazel:icondreamsnhazel:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


some evenings,
i wish my emotions
were shoes,
with nerve endings
that i could untie
until tomorrow,
when i would double-knot them
and trudge on.
on a night like this,
i would look down at them,
caked in mud
and soul wearing thin,
and i would throw them
in the back of the closet.
curtains drawn,
i would retreat to my bed,
forgetting to set the alarm.
©2007-2008 ~dreamsnhazel
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~Interpolny:iconInterpolny: Feb 23, 2007, 11:39:36 AM
this is beautiful, such a nice image :)

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It´s self-assigned penance for problems with easy solutions
-Death Cab For Cutie
~hunnybunny09:iconhunnybunny09: Feb 23, 2007, 4:13:17 PM
You write beautifully!
I like how you write about very personal topics,
and they always seem to relate to everyone else too.
:)
~SapphireIce:iconSapphireIce: Feb 23, 2007, 6:58:59 PM
I love it!! It's beautiful with perfect imagery! :)

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:dance: Those that say sunshine brings happiness have never danced in the rain! :boogie: "Women have to do everything that a man does, but backwards and in high heels!" :boogie: "There are short cuts to happiness, and dancing is one of them." :dance:
~gravewell:icongravewell: Feb 24, 2007, 7:17:32 AM
I just don't see the relationship with the title... ^^;

...but otherwise I like the way the poem works, shoes and all :)

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"Fake happy beats no happy" - Logg, Suikoden V
~dreamsnhazel:icondreamsnhazel: Feb 24, 2007, 2:36:44 PM
the poem's based on a conversation i had with someone, to which she responded, "it's not a solution." i couldn't think of a title when i wrote it, so i just went with that.
~pinksquiggle:iconpinksquiggle: Mar 3, 2007, 12:36:47 PM
short sweet piece.. love the concept of it

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